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Poetic Form: Than Bauk
Inspired: 2024 August 31
Image: Shanghai
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-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A rare good sou-L at Mote-L Six who smel-Led different. Then she tell m-E somebo-Dy took her P-ink wallet. dropped her O-ff someplace d-Owntown I kn-Ow about. Next I had s-Ort self-ctr-Olled and my O-h fresh bills. Gave same addres-S like the la-St cab ride S-aid. Same spot. Story she h-Ad was a b-Ag like purse A-nd not hers. When we avrr-Ived I'm surpr-Ised, that's her, sm-Iling there. Lady beh-Ind said out s-Ide Where'd, you f-Ind it! Well? I had to lo-Ok, say, I kn-Ow her, We're fr-Om Shanghai. (Ladies say to cabbie)

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Date: 8/31/2024 6:12:00 PM
What an Idea to charm. Too amused. Congrats. Blessings.
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Date: 8/31/2024 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Anisha, I stretched it on my website for focused per stanza scrutiny/validity. Aloha William

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