Ladies Choice

First time I remember attending a dance at school
White bucks and a sport coat, feeling like a fool
All week I’d played 45’s and practiced how to dance
I was nearly thirteen now so it was time to take a chance

I walked into the auditorium, friends met me at the door
Ricky singing Poor Little Fool and she danced across the floor
I stared at her, felt my heart go pop when she turned her head
I caught her eye, saw her smile, and felt my face turn red

I was frozen to the floor, didn’t know what to say to the girl
In the corner I stayed, while the DJ played The Duke of Earl
Robin Luke sang Susie Darlin’ and the time was passing by
Then Jack Scott was crooning My True Love and I could only sigh

Chuck Berry wailing Almost Grown, it would soon be time to leave
DJ announced ladies choice with It’s Only Make Believe
It was like a dream come true when I turned around to see
Her standing there and I heard her say will you dance with me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/29/2008 6:08:00 AM
Fond memories rekindled... I was right back in high school with acne and anticipation. Great job my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 10/28/2008 3:39:00 PM
Awww....this is so sweet. Lovely writing. Thank you for the comments on my poem, much appreciated.
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Date: 10/10/2008 3:26:00 PM
Dear Vince: Oh the memories of high school. Nicely written. Thanks for reading my poem. Sincerely, Janice Herzog
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:00:00 PM
I love this poem cause it reminds me of when this guy at homecoming actually asked me to dance with him and I was so embarrassed and shy that I couldn't even answer and just went along with it. . . I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It will always have a place in my heart even you. . .
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Date: 10/4/2008 11:13:00 AM
Ahhh - What a lovely story. I thought it was only we girls who were shy. Perhaps things are different today Vince. - Vince - how can I contact you. I have some news. Email me.
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:03:00 PM
This is so great, brings back so many memories. Wonder how many chances were lost due to both parties being nervous and shy. Good one, really enjoyed this one. Love Heidie
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Date: 10/3/2008 3:40:00 PM
Yeah, Vince ... Its All In The Game ... LOL ... what a wonderful nostalgic write (for those of us old fogies) and thanks so much for your continued support for my writing.
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Date: 10/3/2008 3:17:00 PM
this is priceless, and you got to dance with her in the end, ha ha take care D-ncye
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Date: 10/1/2008 2:41:00 PM
aww. this is one of the sweetest poems ever! Thanks so much for sharing it with us (definitely a pleasure to read) Best regards, Lucinda
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Date: 10/1/2008 1:27:00 PM
Oh yes...this was right out of my Junior High Dances...held in our school gym that still reeked of sweat!! Those white buck shoes, and that little "buffer" thing the kids used to clean them with, instead of polish!! Some of the girls wore white buck shoes too, with those big full skirts. Some of the dances were agony...waiting for someone to ask you to dance! Was fun but also torture!! You stir up some powerful memories, Vince...but I love your poems...those were the best songs!! :)~Carrie
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Date: 10/1/2008 1:15:00 PM
There will always be the sweet memories of our youth to go back to, they always bring a smile. You have that gift of story telling, we need more...I loved this write so much...Always, Christy
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Date: 10/1/2008 1:07:00 PM
My first dance at school was at East High In des moines iowa in 1960, didn't dance, my friend danny and me just watched the girls and tryed to pick some up, we bombed out. this brought back memories those songs were played I am sure. you have such a way of bringing these memories back for us to enjoy thank you.
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Date: 10/1/2008 12:39:00 PM
Vince you brought back so many memories of school dances. Luckily the girls were not so shy as the boys. Thankyou for bringing back the memories. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/1/2008 12:07:00 PM
Well if that isn't the sweetest memory, I don't know what is. You must have been flying high for days after. Yes, those dances were sure the thrilling beginning of socializing with the opposite sex. I too can still remember the butterflies and terror myself. And the wonderful music! Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/1/2008 9:59:00 AM
Yes, we all remember our school dances with fondness - The Beatles were my era and what an impact they had on us! Great nostalgia Vince! Thanks for your comments on "Grandma's Rom" We all miss our grandmothers and know we did not have enough time with them..
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Date: 10/1/2008 7:27:00 AM
Ahh Vince - What a beautiful ending - I still stutter but nothing like in school - Imagine this if you will "wwwwwwwwwould yyyyoooouuuuu lllliiikee ttttoooo ddddddance" Needless to say I was the quiet type back in those days - Great poem Vince as yours always are - God Bless
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