Lack of Guidance

Ship without rudder,
On the sea of influence:
Direction unknown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 2:40 PM
enjoyed reading today.... we are fixing to go on the creek in a rubber canoe....If you don't hear from me call 911....;]
Brown Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Raul. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
Tacito Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:29 AM
So true!!!
Bloomsfield Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:37 AM
When a ship looses its direction,it can end up in rough seas Raul. .very clever senryu dear friend.
White Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 3:22 AM
These ten words open the door to a deeper awareness.
Nutter Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 2:47 AM
Well said my friend.
Devonshire Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 2:10 AM
This describes many of our youth today, Raul. Haven't seen you here in a while. Hope all is well. Insightful poem. Love, Carolyn
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