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Lack of Guidance

Ship without rudder, On the sea of influence: Direction unknown.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/31/2011 2:40:00 PM

enjoyed reading today.... we are fixing to go on the creek in a rubber canoe....If you don't hear from me call 911....;]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 10:49:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Raul. May you have a beautiful week of good health, love and baskets overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/28/2011 7:29:00 AM

So true!!!

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 3/28/2011 6:37:00 AM

When a ship looses its direction,it can end up in rough seas Raul. .very clever senryu dear friend.

Curtis White

Date: 3/28/2011 3:22:00 AM

These ten words open the door to a deeper awareness.

Anthony Nutter

Date: 3/28/2011 2:47:00 AM

Well said my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 2:10:00 AM

This describes many of our youth today, Raul. Haven't seen you here in a while. Hope all is well. Insightful poem. Love, Carolyn