Laborous Miles

Walking many miles
In someone elses worn shoes.
Melds hearts together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 19, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Hi Marty, an exceptional Senryu...well-written for the contest...I wish you good luck..even though not necessary because this is a winner..filled with introspection.. Peace, Audrey Soup Mail
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April 19, 2010 at 4:04 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Marty. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 1:23 PM
Well much good luck in Raul's current contest which just closed this morning.. an excellent view of the photo of the sandals.. my entry u already read so good luck my dear friend...everything OK? ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 18, 2010 at 11:29 AM
So much truth in your words. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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April 18, 2010 at 7:02 AM
Indeed it does, Marty. Very nice interpretation of the photo. Love, Carolyn
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