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Laboring

perfect pace of performance portends potage and potables 5/11/2022 WORK PERSPECTIVE MONOKU Sponsor: Beata Agustin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2022 12:38:00 PM

cool imagery AND use of sounds. Congrats on the win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2022 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/22/2022 6:18:00 PM

Hi Kim, Excellent alliteration in Monoku and performance on your part. Thanks for your kind comment on mine Howard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2022 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, Howard!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/22/2022 8:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A Wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/22/2022 8:11:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing your great "alliterative monoku" on work perspective. God bless you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/22/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Beata! :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/13/2022 11:00:00 PM

lovely monoku, not easy to do, but easy for you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2022 6:53:00 PM

I don’t know about easy.. I thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/12/2022 5:10:00 AM

Perfect alliteration, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/11/2022 10:05:00 PM

Splendid alliteration. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2022 7:43:00 PM

Great alliteration Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/11/2022 6:40:00 PM

Thanks for teaching me two new words (for me) in such pleasing fashion!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! :)