Laboring

perfect pace of performance portends potage and potables


5/11/2022
WORK PERSPECTIVE MONOKU
Sponsor: Beata Agustin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:38 PM
cool imagery AND use of sounds. Congrats on the win.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Kerr Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 6:18 PM
Hi Kim, Excellent alliteration in Monoku and performance on your part. Thanks for your kind comment on mine Howard
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Howard!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A Wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Agustin Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your great "alliterative monoku" on work perspective. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Beata! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
May 13, 2022 at 11:00 PM
lovely monoku, not easy to do, but easy for you!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2022 at 6:53 PM
I don’t know about easy.. I thank you!
Pandit Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:10 AM
Perfect alliteration, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 10:05 PM
Splendid alliteration. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Victor! Hugs ~
May Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Great alliteration Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 6:40 PM
Thanks for teaching me two new words (for me) in such pleasing fashion!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2022 at 5:18 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
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