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AN OLD SHOVEL Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John lawless Written: August 12, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ Once an archaic shovel—worn and rusted, Now reborn, its purpose adjusted. Become the shovel, embrace its might, Revel in its past—a tale to ignite With calloused palms—strength untold, The shovel bore deep, breaking through the mold. Sweat dripped down—mingling with the earth, As dreams of a fitter future gave birth. Of arduous work and toil, Of digging trenches and turning soil. From dawn until dusk, it never wavered. A faithful companion—never faltered. Ponder its present—a relic of the past, But it is still a tool—its purpose is vast. Now resting against a weathered shed, Its once sharp edge—now dull and dead. The shovel, once a symbol of might, Now waits patiently for its chance to ignite. Bestowed by a child, curious and free, The shovel becomes a treasure, a key. To dig and explore, to uncover the unknown, To create castles and kingdoms of their own. The child marvels—at its worn-out charm, As they dig deeper, their imagination warms. They uncover hidden treasures, buried deep. Imaginary worlds—where secrets—keep The shovel, now a vessel for dreams, Guiding the child through endless streams. With each scoop of earth, a raw adventure awaits. As the shovel unearths, the child's excitement escalates. They discover fossils and ancient bones. Unlocking mysteries—rewriting history's tone The shovel journey continues, ever-evolving. From laborers' hands to children's exploring. It reminds us of the power within. To shape the world, to uncover, and to begin. Explore its meaning, the shovel essence, A symbol of resilience and presence. In its worn-out state, it still holds worth. Teaching us lessons of resilience and rebirth. From laborer—to child The shovel journey—ever wild So let us honor this humble tool, A testament to the human spirit fuel.

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Date: 8/13/2023 5:35:00 AM
Very well done, Lasaad!
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Date: 8/12/2023 11:00:00 PM
Lovely clever piece my friend. The theme is cleverly crafted by a representation of a great tool the shovel which in turn you use to show as an example of the human spirit. Such great analogy you have chosen Lasaad. This one is a favorite and it is definitely POTD material. Congratulations on a fine effort Lasaad. God bless you my friend...
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Date: 8/12/2023 8:45:00 PM
There is so much to discover in the relics of the past. Their very usefulness is historical since the invention of machines to do our work for us. A fine write my friend filled with imagination. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/12/2023 1:24:00 PM
Amazing take on a mere shovel, Sotto! Good luck with the contest!
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