Labor Day

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Fallen star
In my dark
I needed someone to love me; who dies for it in the same way
I had given up on love
I had given up on trust
I had given up on sorrow, pulling me downward and away
You wouldn't allow me to dry into dust
You wouldn't allow me to be, waste thereof
You wouldn't let misery go on for another labor day
Now I'm forever changed because you decided you want to stay
You did not leave me be a decaying metal to simply rust
You became an anodized coating, protecting my heart hereof
With love in this vessel where you belong and will forever stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/2/2024 11:16:00 AM
This is very sweet- and very real, A.S. Your emotion pours through- <3 hugs
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Paige Hind
Date: 9/2/2024 4:42:00 PM
Oh, interesting...your own form, that's great! <3
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Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 9/2/2024 2:12:00 PM
Trying my hand at an original poetic form. There is a a very specific progressive syllable/rhyme pattern to this one. I am glad the emotions can be felt when it is read!! Thank you dearly for the wonderful compliments!! Regards A.S.
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