labor day

no sounding alarm his workboots off laborer sleeps respite this morn

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2024 7:46:00 PM

Like a Norman Rockwell painting in words for me. Very nicely done, Regina!

Regina Elliott
Date: 8/28/2024 4:08:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Your impression of my poem is brilliant as you envisioned it like a Norman Rockwell painting, an American laborer asleep Labor Day morning, his workboots on the floor. Well done! I wish Norman Rockwell was still around to paint it. Have a blessed evening, good poetry friend. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2024 5:52:00 PM

Like it! A brief respite!

Regina Elliott
Date: 8/28/2024 4:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim! May you and your family have a blessed evening. :)