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La Elsa Tableau

Lost silver’s feral
As it swirls aqua ~

Elemental chance
looms on fins primal
Sated or not, swims
and grins......eureka!

(3/26/2021: picture 1)

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Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2021 at 12:32 PM

Back with my congrats. Enjoy your Easter Weekend, Susan.

Susan Woodrow

April 2, 2021 at 9:31 PM

Thank you, Andrea... you too :)

Eve Roper

March 31, 2021 at 9:49 PM

Great imagery, Susan, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Susan Woodrow

April 1, 2021 at 5:33 AM

Thank you:)

Kim Merryman

March 31, 2021 at 3:10 PM

Well done, Susan! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Woodrow

March 31, 2021 at 5:16 PM

Thank you :)

Joseph May

March 31, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Very nicely penned Susan, Congrats on your win

Susan Woodrow

March 31, 2021 at 5:17 PM

Thank you :)

Harry Horsman

March 29, 2021 at 10:34 PM

Excellent entry for the contest, Susan love it..

Susan Woodrow

March 30, 2021 at 8:20 AM

Thank you :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 29, 2021 at 5:17 PM

very cool imagery of that picture number one, Susan. All the best in the contest.

Susan Woodrow

March 29, 2021 at 5:54 PM

Thank you :)

Jan Allison

March 29, 2021 at 10:39 AM

what an excellent interpretation of the picture prompt, wont ever get me diving ... except for the last chocolate in the box lol:-) then i;d look like a shark/whale lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow

March 29, 2021 at 1:27 PM

Thanks Jan...lol i snorkel mostly as I don’t like the breathing against resistance of scuba and breathing thru my mouth feels awful unless I’m gasping for breath and hopefully it will never be coz of a shark confrontation...i do want to swim with a whale shark though. :)

Suzette Richards

March 26, 2021 at 11:33 PM

I love sharks and mourne the fact that they have mysteriously departed from our bay. A few rules such as never to swim at dusk or dawn will keep most people safe. I enjoyed your poem and the thought process it had triggered. :)) ~Sus

Suzette Richards

March 27, 2021 at 10:04 AM

:))

Susan Woodrow

March 27, 2021 at 6:51 AM

They are unfairly maligned and it is their habitat we invade...yes, the other rules i know are no flashy jewels and for island free divers, no trailing the speared catch by your side... glad you enjoyed it :)

Carolyn Devonshire

March 26, 2021 at 2:08 PM

Sharks are so frightening. You captured the fear they evoke so well, Susan, and I love your description of "fins primal." Best wishes for a win! Carolyn

Susan Woodrow

March 26, 2021 at 2:17 PM

Thank you :)

La Elsa Tableau

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