L Plus R Forever

True love everlasting is carved into trees, 
Who of the two will eventually cede?

There cannot be question as to which prevails longer,
Bark slowly heals as the heart grows still fonder

Yet heartbreak cuts deeper than knife’s sharp edge can, 
When did Earth’s skin become lesser than man's?

Two losing birds and only one stone,
But at least the tree is never alone

It has brothers and sisters and pathways below,
Though eventually there will come one final blow -

I would be bitter if you carved up my arms,
Withhold my charity from any who harm,

Then where will we be?

Love may be “set free,”

But we still need trees to breathe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
May 2, 2024 at 2:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Croft Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 8:11 PM
Fantastic poem! Welcome to poetrysoup
Stinchcomb Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 3:13 PM
Thank you so much!
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