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Great winning verse babe I do see here, us mortals shiver shake with fear:) here comes the iron maiden, near... beware of all temtation, here:) sweetly, anon, johnson's gone. so long,
Don
Yes Deb tantalyzing sweet it be, the kitten swings, n there be ye be, all dressed in irish lore, begorrah sure...by me before:) done diddly did it.........Don
Yes Joe the subtle fix for loonytics, is in the poultry soop, escape into the words n rhyme, where johnson gets a kick, most times... sometimes inflicts:(
4 Deb Its like playing cards in the dark, not knowing if its nark or shark, but poet you is are for sure, just as sure as dumbledore, ol johnson sure can squark...
Lee, What you say is truly right, an open mind sets the spark alight, never doubting, stronger will, correct the hunches, might you chill, the masters pattern, a delight...
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August 4, 2011 at 10:04 PM
well DON I do appreciate the top billing here with this poetry .. I like the form used and the words are simply divine in rhyme and in kind .. am happily fine like fine wine sitting in beach sun to shine and entwine in DON's lines..luv..thankxxx...
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August 4, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Great to read you t'day Don, all the best..
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