Ku 5

poetry written
from first cry to last silence
unfinished always
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 11:44 PM
das, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 7:16 PM
ASHESH :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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May 23, 2012 at 7:10 AM
Perfect form and composition! I'm always editing and re-editing, so for me this is so true!! Best wishes, Keith
Williams Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 4:51 AM
Ashesh, just read all of your work, I like them a lot, this is great, welcome to the soup...kepp writing..David
Das Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 5:02 AM
Thank you so much David. Regards, A. D.
May Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 4:37 AM
nice haiku
Das Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 4:42 AM
Thank you so much. Regards, A. D.
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