Kristian

My big strong lad, well who'd have thought, you'd turn out quite so well, You put me through the mill a bit, some days we'd fight like hell. I was so pleased when you achieved the little things at school, But then you'd disappoint again and act the bloody fool. you were a good kid underneath, a clever boy, I know, A heart as big as you can get, you always let it show. You've grown into a handsome man, my rock i sometimes say, My love for you is there on show, every hour, every minute, every day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 19, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Carolyne. Love, Carol
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March 18, 2010 at 1:19 PM
What a beautiful write Carolyne - I enjoyed your words in this write - Thanks for sharing -:)
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March 18, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Great write about a son that your work shows that you definitely love...Keep the creative pen...Sara
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