Korean melon hiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice Y Poetry Contest 12 June 2025

( ---)- (---) sunlit skin shimmers - - (----) - flesh as fresh as morning dew~ seeds on my fingers

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2025 8:57:00 AM

I really like this. Bet Brian will too

Ghairo Daniels

Date: 6/13/2025 1:10:00 AM

I love this - clear & expressive. I can just c the seeds on your fingers. Xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/12/2025 10:20:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. I have 2 melons here but have never had a Korean melon. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away......

Tom Woody

Date: 6/12/2025 7:28:00 AM

I don't know much about Korean melons but Korean/Asian pears rock! Nice haiku