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For Brian Strand's Your Choice Y Poetry Contest 12 June 2025

Korean melon hiku

( ---)-  (---)        sunlit skin shimmers
- -   (----) -    flesh as fresh as morning dew~
                          seeds on my fingers
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Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2025 at 8:57 AM
I really like this. Bet Brian will too
Daniels Avatar
June 13, 2025 at 1:10 AM
I love this - clear & expressive. I can just c the seeds on your fingers. Xx
Goldsmith Avatar
June 12, 2025 at 10:20 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. I have 2 melons here but have never had a Korean melon. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away......
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