komorebi

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Is the Japanese concept of Komorebi (see pic) really culturally untranslatable? - Rashmee Roshan Lall

My stance in front of me, komorebi
I stand a brisk falls midst autumn trees
My Father’s sunlight, shining awe bright
Through illuminist lines shines catechism
Strings and streams of visual lights
Cascading streams raining down lit visions
Of downward peering streaks of light
Shines shun the spears light twinkles
Radiant beams of light shining
Through the foldage branches stock 
Like beams of brilliants sights
Peekaboo peeking streams lines of light
I stand a brisk autumn amidst autumn tree
My stance in front of me komorebi

11/9/23
For Komorebi Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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