komorebi

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Is the Japanese concept of Komorebi (see pic) really culturally untranslatable? - Rashmee Roshan Lall

My stance in front of me, komorebi I stand a brisk falls midst autumn trees My Father’s sunlight, shining awe bright Through illuminist lines shines catechism Strings and streams of visual lights Cascading streams raining down lit visions Of downward peering streaks of light Shines shun the spears light twinkles Radiant beams of light shining Through the foldage branches stock Like beams of brilliants sights Peekaboo peeking streams lines of light I stand a brisk autumn amidst autumn tree My stance in front of me komorebi 11/9/23 For Komorebi Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Craig Cornish

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