Susan Jeavons Poet Rhyme

Kokopelli Wind

Kokopelli Wind

The sound of flute
plays Kokopelli's song
as wind carries
his seeds along.
Kokopelli dances in rain
fertility Kokopelli's aim.
When Spring flowers
burst into bloom
Kokopelli's dance
will resume
to bring life to everything.
Kokopelli, Kokopelli,
sing, sing, sing...

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Paul Callus November 21, 2019 at 3:16 PM The tune of your poetic flute floats and twirls with the wind, Susan. Truly enjoyed. Regards // paul Susan Jeavons November 22, 2019 at 12:58 PM Thank you Paul! That's what I wanted it to do. Blessings, Susan

Lunita Blanca October 29, 2019 at 6:32 PM Wonder what happens to Kokopelli in Winter? Perhapts Kokopelli continues to work on individuals fertility. Learned someting knew today Susan, thank you. Susan Jeavons October 29, 2019 at 8:36 PM Perhaps! Or maybe he hibernates and saves his energy for Spring. Kokopelli was new to me too. I read about it, then wrote the poem. Then found out that my friend Panagiota has a passion for Kokopelli! Blessings to you all. Susan

Panagiota Romios October 13, 2019 at 10:09 AM Forgo to tell you..I am FAVE-ing it)) PR Susan Jeavons October 29, 2019 at 8:30 PM Thank you Panagiota! You're so kind! Blessings, Susan

Panagiota Romios October 13, 2019 at 10:05 AM Oh, golly! I have a passion for Kokopelki. I never head of him before I went to Arizona. I have a notebook with all Kokopelis on the cover. It's beautiful. A very fine write. Panagiota xx Susan Jeavons October 13, 2019 at 10:20 AM Cool! I love Native American legends. I saw the one about Kokopelli and it just came to me. Thank you so much Panagiota for making it a favorite! Hugs and Blessings, Susan

Arturo Michael October 10, 2019 at 8:40 AM What a lovely write... I like how to placed this one, "fertility Kokopelli's aim" Susan Jeavons October 10, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thank you Arturo. Kokopelli was their fertility God. For every living thing; flowers, trees, animals and babies. Blessings, Susan