Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Haiku

Koel

cognize spring’s entrance

                                banqueting on new born buds...

                                    warbling waves suffused






Bird Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Date: 16-03-2022
Syllable count : How Many Syllables
Placed: 2nd

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Eve Roper March 28, 2022 at 9:16 PM Great imagery, Patri , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest. Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:56 AM Thank you so much for the best compliments.

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2022 at 9:03 PM Congratulations in this contest. I enjoyed reading your winning poem. Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.

Kim Rodrigues March 28, 2022 at 8:51 PM Congratulations, Patri! Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2022 at 6:08 AM Enjoyed readding your winning work. Congrats. Way to go. Sara Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:54 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Christuraj Alex March 27, 2022 at 8:24 PM "warbling waves suffused" - Beautiful. Congratulations! Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:54 AM Thanks a lot for the compliments!

Tania Kitchin March 27, 2022 at 4:26 PM Patri, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku! Patri Venkata Ramana March 31, 2022 at 9:53 AM Thanks a lot for the best compliments.