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Knuckle Bumps

The itsy bitsy fighter Went up to start his bout Down came the pain And knocked the fighter out Out came the blood And dried up on his brain So the itsy bitsy fighter Would never bout again

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Date: 5/23/2024 9:01:00 AM
Oh both whimsical and poignant…you stop us in our tracks with a punch to the gut!
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Randy Freie
Date: 5/25/2024 11:18:00 PM
Thanks Kim, but I consider myself a pacifist and would never punch anyone. Not while they were looking at least. Lol
Date: 5/22/2024 7:59:00 AM
Nice fresh duplicating rhyme punch in the face. Very refreshing.
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Randy Freie
Date: 5/22/2024 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Benjamin, I guess it's better to be realistic than pugilistic.

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