Known Life's Unknown Trip

an ant on a leaf
                                     floating drifting in water 
                                     known life's unknown trip
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 5:48 PM
I think that the ant has a very short life. Beczuse he goes on a trip and it is unknown if he will return. A nice Senryu.
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May 30, 2017 at 12:48 PM
nice senryun poet
Devnath  Avatar
May 30, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Thanks for your comment my dear friend. Loved always, bl
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