Knowledge My Habibi and I Lazy Write

ERICK VERSION
 
Well,I'll paint my face red
sharpen my spear
i am on the pad of war.
I will put foot to work here.
knowledge is my weapon.
A Chinese in Hong Kong make me mad
i will kick his ass.  

MY VERSION
 
I'll put on my hoodie
spears on my back
gladiators on my feet
head to the jungle.
Knowledge will be my shield.
This war i must win.
Any soldier that stand between
victory and i
their ass i will kick. 

(Just a way for us  to ease the pain of the distance and spaces between us!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:05 AM
He did fine but it pales in comparison to yours...Congrats to both...Tim
Nganga Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:13 AM
Haha!Thanks Tim! xoxo!!!!
Dom Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 9:18 AM
An amusing write and well done. There is poetry in everything, everyday. We just have to watch for it. Well done Erick and Penninha.
Nganga Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 2:12 AM
Thanks Michael!!! Have a lovely day!!!
Nganga Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:18 AM
Poor wonderful man|!he has never tried poetry before!!!Haha!i would say he did good!?!?!
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