Brian Strand Poet Kyrielle

Knowing You

Are you who you are 
or just a wanna be

Are you who you are 
unable to fly free

Are you who you are 
living just in today

Are you who you are 
or merely who you say

Are you who you are 
who lets inner talents live

Are you who you are 
with so much love to give

Are you who you are 
for He is who He is
I am,who I am
With Him,you surely can

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Debbie Guzzi July 29, 2009 at 3:41 PM Had me good till the last 2 lines....though my mind has recently been in a similiar vane. Popeye's Gal LOL...work those last 2 lines...I know I nag. Light & Love

Laurie Ginn June 30, 2009 at 7:21 PM Eeeks this is good, I really like the form as well, great, thoughtful and introspective

Michaela Payne June 30, 2009 at 4:35 PM Amen! I love this, it's so inspiring and full of hope. I love it! Such a wise poem, thanks so much for sharing your wisdom. Blessings, ~Michaela~

Christopher Higgins June 30, 2009 at 9:41 AM Wonderful poetry with wisdom...love the last stanza..

Carrie Richards June 30, 2009 at 8:07 AM The last stanza says it all !! Well done! ~ Best wishes, Carrie

Charlene Bird June 30, 2009 at 6:48 AM Brian, You always have a so much light that shines from your talented pen. EXcellent!

James Marshall Goff June 30, 2009 at 4:21 AM Brian, very spiritually moving, jim

Tiffanie Marks June 30, 2009 at 3:26 AM It reminds me of being in High School again.