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sitin herein class dreamin hopein an wishin to have my babygurl back here in my arms holdin u but then she want to be free from hurtn pain the way i want to be free from the same thin but then why dose it feel like it still meant to be an my heart an soul is so empty wit out u can`t spend 3 sec wit out cryin or wish dat ur back here *hold* *hearts* *dreams* *souls* *wishes* can`t help to cry till ur back here baby dat wen my heart will stop bleedin for n ur love n it tears me dat were threw n all i feel is pain t my heart n soul

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Date: 6/3/2010 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mitasha. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations and welcome. Wish more success in the future. Ernilando
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mitasha. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:19:00 AM
Sometimes we suffer, sometimes we laugh, sometimes we look for meaning ... while meaning is looking for us. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. Good write
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Date: 2/5/2010 2:24:00 AM
sorry for the suffering
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