Knowen

sitin herein class
dreamin hopein an
wishin to have my
babygurl back here

in my arms holdin u but
then she want to be free
from hurtn pain the way i
want to be free from the

same thin but then why
dose it feel like it still
meant to be an my heart an
soul is so empty wit out u

can`t spend 3 sec wit out
cryin or wish dat ur back here
*hold* *hearts* *dreams* *souls*
*wishes* can`t help to cry till

ur back here baby dat wen
my heart will stop bleedin
for n ur love n it tears me
dat were threw n all i feel is
pain t my heart n soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Mitasha. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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April 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations and welcome. Wish more success in the future. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mitasha. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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February 5, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Sometimes we suffer, sometimes we laugh, sometimes we look for meaning ... while meaning is looking for us. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. Good write
Palli Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 2:24 AM
sorry for the suffering
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