Suzanne Need Poet Rhyme

Knocking on heavens door

I want to go to heaven,to knock on heavens door,to visit all my loved ones,that don’t live here anymore..We all should have a party,one big reunion in the sky,I want to hug them tightly,before I have to say goodbye..I wish there were appointments,I’d go visit everyday,then god could see how much I love them,and not take them all away

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Beata Agustin October 21, 2025 at 7:15 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.