Knock--- Acrostic

Keep me open to the sound, to see the sun and feel the breeze

Not afraid to feel the cold, willing,... growing, ... never closed to sounds of rain

Open my ears to raindrops falling..., someone, please, may be in pain

Call them in, to offer shelter, or is that knocking from my knees?
 
Knock my socks off now and then, a hard knock school is not in vain


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For Andrea's Contest: "5 line acrostic"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 5:16 PM
Carrie, love the twist you make midway in this, very well written acrostic!
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September 20, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Hi Carrie,, congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA
A  Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Carrie, Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~
Anglesey Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:08 AM
A very creative write. Congrats on your win :)
Mohammed Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Wow! Carrie. This one really swept me away. Its no wonder that you won.
Guzzi Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 8:54 AM
A fav movie of mine in the scary venue Is The Tommy Knockers!' Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Morgan Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 4:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 3:48 AM
Very nice one, Carrie. I especially liked those first three lines,spiritual type message. Congrats in my contest.
Sivey Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 10:08 PM
This is a truthful and superior write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, full of wonderment Carrie! Great Work!!
Tacito Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 7:41 PM
Very, very slick message here. I understand this all to well. Great job!
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