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Knighting

Kneel, young man, before your
King. Sword blade on shoulder.
Know the oath: be truthful,
Keep your word, be humble,
Kill only to defend
Kingdom and the helpless.
Knight, rise. Live with honor.

March 9, 2016
For contest Pleiades K
Sponsored by Kim Merryman

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Line Gauthier Date: 7/24/2018 10:39:00 PM A beauty. Excellent execution, Agnes. Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 3/20/2017 4:31:00 PM I like the way you've blended each line into the next to create a cohesive narrative, but still meeting the criteria of the form. A worth win... Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/14/2017 9:12:00 AM Excellent poem, Agnes, congratulations on your win:) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/14/2017 3:57:00 AM - Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Agnes :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Connie Pachecho Date: 3/14/2017 12:14:00 AM I agree with everyone's sentiments. This is great. Love the continuity,flow, story tell. Well deserved placement. Congrats. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/13/2017 10:19:00 PM Great write and win Agnes..Congrats Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 10:39:00 PM Thanks, Joseph.

Charlie Smith Date: 3/13/2017 10:18:00 PM Right where you belong, congratulations Agnes.... Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 10:39:00 PM Thanks, Charlie.

Maria Williams Date: 3/13/2017 6:35:00 PM What a great poem, brought back GREAT memories of the movie Camelot for me. Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 10:39:00 PM Thank you, Maria.

Deborah Burch Date: 3/13/2017 5:49:00 PM Hey Agnes!! I knew this would rank highly when I first read it!! Congratulations my friend. Well done. Big Hugggs deb Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 10:38:00 PM Thank you, Deb.

Paul Callus Date: 3/13/2017 4:53:00 PM Back with congratulations for a deserved first place win, Agnes....I had no doubt it would do well! Regards // paul Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 10:38:00 PM Thank you, Paul.

Roy Pett Date: 3/13/2017 4:25:00 PM Congratulations Agnes on your 1st place, well deserved, great Pleiades. Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 4:38:00 PM Thanks, Roy.

Kim Merryman Date: 3/13/2017 4:20:00 PM Agnes, very well written. Your smooth flowing lines created a vivid picture. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/13/2017 4:35:00 PM Thank you so much, Kim - I feel honored. Your contest series is so much fun, thanks for doing it. I would never have discovered this form otherwise.

Paul Callus Date: 3/12/2017 12:34:00 PM Excellent theme, flow and overall content, Agnes. #7 This entry deserves a high placing. Regards // paul Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:18:00 PM Thank you for your kind comment, Paul.

Matthew Anish Date: 3/10/2017 2:37:00 PM A King of a poem here. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:12:00 PM Thank you, Matthew.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2017 9:08:00 PM I love how you approached this one. Excellent! Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:13:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. I tried rhyming, but this time it just wouldn't go.

Roy Pett Date: 3/9/2017 5:32:00 PM Great Pleiades Agnes, you have made an hard task look easy well done, good luck in contest, Roy. :)) Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:13:00 PM Thanks for visiting, Roy - these are really fun.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2017 2:16:00 PM - A great one, Agnes - Well done - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 3/9/2017 9:03:00 AM Really nice and a great theme choice for the letter K. Really well written Agnes Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:12:00 PM Thanks, Chris. K was harder than other letters.

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/9/2017 8:57:00 AM Wonderful and clever pleiade poem Agnes! G/L in the contest!~Ce :) Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:12:00 PM Thanks, Cheryl.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/9/2017 7:46:00 AM This is great Agnes. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply Agnes Krampe Date: 3/12/2017 6:11:00 PM Thanks, Heidi.