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Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope Struggling to heed the voice of our conscience We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke Flame of desire within, spews toxic smoke Concealing innate self-luminescence Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope Blinded by delusion, in darkness grope Looking at divine love impulse askance We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke Fierce winds blow; we are unable to cope On knife’s edge, head and heart try to balance Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope Floundering thus, on a slippery slope Gods love and egos urge at divergence We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke Gods love and light beckons, giving souls hope Requiring our wholehearted acceptance Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke 17-May-2021 This or That , Vol 3 poetry contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 6/19/2021 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and fantastic write.
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Date: 6/19/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 6/18/2021 11:27:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Seeker! Definitely one of the best written for the "Knife's Edge" theme. Congratulations on your fine win in my contest!
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Date: 6/18/2021 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! Thanks for hosting! Always happy to participate
Date: 6/18/2021 7:22:00 AM
Wow. Great. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 5/17/2021 6:41:00 PM
Life's journey can be rocky, but faith helps us on the journey, Very nicely penned..
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Date: 5/18/2021 4:10:00 AM
Faith. Rock steady resolve, yes, spurred by a burning yearning to connect with our own divinity within
Date: 5/17/2021 2:39:00 PM
You are such a deep and reflective thinker! And you showed it so well in your villanelle. Very nice.
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Date: 5/17/2021 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Not deep, I’d say, rather separating the wheat from the chaff
Date: 5/17/2021 11:16:00 AM
You seem to be an expert at villanelle. Sometimes sponsors cannot express themselves properly. Well composed poem. Man has a choice. Not all chose well.
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Date: 5/17/2021 6:31:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Victor!
Date: 5/17/2021 9:38:00 AM
Intriguing rhymes with consistent positive message. Nice job, Unseeking Seeker!
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Date: 5/17/2021 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Milton!
Date: 5/17/2021 9:24:00 AM
A great Villanelle. Well written. I hope your day is going well. :)
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Date: 5/17/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Heidi! :)
Date: 5/17/2021 5:08:00 AM
Wonderful write. Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:13:00 AM
Thank you, dear Regina!

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