Knife's Edge

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Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope 
Struggling to heed the voice of our conscience 
We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke

Flame of desire within, spews toxic smoke
Concealing innate self-luminescence 
Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope 

Blinded by delusion, in darkness grope
Looking at divine love impulse askance
We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke

Fierce winds blow; we are unable to cope
On knife’s edge, head and heart try to balance
Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope 

Floundering thus, on a slippery slope
Gods love and egos urge at divergence
We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke

Gods love and light beckons, giving souls hope
Requiring our wholehearted acceptance
Moment to moment, we walk the tightrope 
We search for that bliss, of which scriptures spoke

17-May-2021

This or That , Vol 3 poetry contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/19/2021 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and fantastic write.
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Date: 6/19/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 6/18/2021 11:27:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Seeker! Definitely one of the best written for the "Knife's Edge" theme. Congratulations on your fine win in my contest!
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Date: 6/18/2021 6:30:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! Thanks for hosting! Always happy to participate
Date: 6/18/2021 7:22:00 AM
Wow. Great. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/18/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 5/17/2021 6:41:00 PM
Life's journey can be rocky, but faith helps us on the journey, Very nicely penned..
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Date: 5/18/2021 4:10:00 AM
Faith. Rock steady resolve, yes, spurred by a burning yearning to connect with our own divinity within
Date: 5/17/2021 2:39:00 PM
You are such a deep and reflective thinker! And you showed it so well in your villanelle. Very nice.
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Date: 5/17/2021 6:32:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! Not deep, I’d say, rather separating the wheat from the chaff
Date: 5/17/2021 11:16:00 AM
You seem to be an expert at villanelle. Sometimes sponsors cannot express themselves properly. Well composed poem. Man has a choice. Not all chose well.
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Date: 5/17/2021 6:31:00 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Victor!
Date: 5/17/2021 9:38:00 AM
Intriguing rhymes with consistent positive message. Nice job, Unseeking Seeker!
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Date: 5/17/2021 10:04:00 AM
Thank you, Milton!
Date: 5/17/2021 9:24:00 AM
A great Villanelle. Well written. I hope your day is going well. :)
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Date: 5/17/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Heidi! :)
Date: 5/17/2021 5:08:00 AM
Wonderful write. Love it. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:13:00 AM
Thank you, dear Regina!
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