Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Kneeling

  Keep me on my grateful
              knees Lord, lead me to your
         Kingdom with love and hope-
                     Kindle my burning flame-
          Kiss my cheek and give me
                          keys into heaven’s door-
                 Kneeling…I beg for grace.



Pleiades K - Poetry Contest 
March 9, 2017

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Joanna Daniel March 14, 2017 at 9:18 AM This is an excellent prayer that we all must pray, Laura:) a 7:) congratulations:)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 14, 2017 at 3:59 AM - Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Laura :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Burch March 13, 2017 at 5:53 PM Congratulations Laura!! Well done! Hugggs deb

Roy Pett March 13, 2017 at 5:04 PM Congratulations Laura, great Pleiades, well deserved win.

Agnes Krampe March 13, 2017 at 4:48 PM Congrats on your win with this moving poem, luloo.

Kim Merryman March 13, 2017 at 4:28 PM Laura, from the first time I read this I knew it was going to place #1. A beautiful prayer that I so easily relate to. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2017 at 8:37 PM wow, Laura. I think I am seeing one that will place super high. You really did a good job with every word used for the lines!

Roy Pett March 9, 2017 at 5:26 PM An inspirational poem Laura, so well written, good luck in the contest, Roy. :))

Laura Leiser March 9, 2017 at 2:53 PM Love the wonderful, worshipful way you expressed the subject of kneeling, Laura Loo! Should do very well in the contest, I believe :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2017 at 2:14 PM A really nice and peaceful pleiades, Laura - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Medders Tobechi March 9, 2017 at 12:40 PM Lovely Laura. It should do well in the contest. GL.

Supraja Kannan March 9, 2017 at 8:48 AM Great uplifting one Laura...Hope it wins Good luck with the contest...

Cheryl Hoffman March 9, 2017 at 8:36 AM Love your inspirational write Laura! G/L in the contest!~Che :)