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Kiwi

Like a man at confession, I admit I was wrong; letting the Kiwi loll idly long. Now they are soft as a cotton ball; against God's law we are nothing at all.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/26/2019 6:15:00 PM

Hello Allen Beilisdhmidt, I like the kwi, but it does not like me. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/26/2019 9:00:00 PM

Thank you commenting Darlene

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/26/2019 4:06:00 PM

I adore Kiwi. It has three times the vitamin C as an orange. Sweet poem Allen! : ) xxoo

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/26/2019 9:00:00 PM

Thank Connie. Yes it's a very healthy fruit

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/26/2019 8:42:00 AM

Great one Allen :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/26/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Heidi