Kiwi

Like a man at confession,
I admit I was wrong;

letting the Kiwi loll
idly long.

Now they are soft
as a cotton ball;

against God's law
we are nothing at all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Hello Allen Beilisdhmidt, I like the kwi, but it does not like me. I enjoyed this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Thank you commenting Darlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 4:06 PM
I adore Kiwi. It has three times the vitamin C as an orange. Sweet poem Allen! : ) xxoo
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Thank Connie. Yes it's a very healthy fruit
Sands Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Great one Allen :)
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 8:51 AM
Thank you Heidi
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