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Kitty Kitty Bird Bird Nursery Rhyme

little kitty watched the birds, from the rose bush to the fence, from the fence to the rose bush, from the rose bush to the fence, to and fro the three birds flew, in little kitty’s full view! said the kitty to the birds, why can’t we all be ‘play friends’! robin, blue chest and sparrow, I will catch if you fly low, so If I miss you, you win but If I catch you, I win! little birds laughed at kitty, Kitty, Kitty, how witty! if we play that game with you, we know well what you will do! cats and birds cannot be friends, out you go! find your own friends!
1St Placement Written 10/April/2021 Nursery Rhyme 4 competition Eve Roper sponsored 7 syllables with 6 lines in each stanza x3
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April 22, 2021 at 7:09 PM
This is so adorable, Krish. How it did not finish at the top of the #1 pile I have no idea. Oh, well. You'll have to settle for a trophy and all my gushing admiration. Cheers, Gershon
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April 22, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Thanks Gershon! I enjoy writing and happy with whatever comes! Pleased it was liked by many and when children like it, that is the real reward!! Good to hear from you and hope you are back after your holiday!
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April 17, 2021 at 1:22 PM
Kitty trying to be sneaky but birds are too smart. Cute, story, Krish! Congrats on your 1st place win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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April 17, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Thanks Kim! Pleased to have your kind comments! Have a great weekend!
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April 16, 2021 at 11:18 PM
Nice one Krish...Congrats on your win...do take care :)
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April 17, 2021 at 1:25 PM
Thanks Carol! Nice to hear from you! Good wishes to you!
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April 16, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Krish! What a wonderful tale you tell!! Well done you!! Your imagery makes it easy to visualise the pacing feline! Lol! I’m with the birds—I don’t trust that kitty either! But poor kitty can not help it, its just what a kitty does. Lol. Congratulations on your win!! And thank you for your most encouraging visit! Deb
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April 16, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Deb, Thanks for your visit and lovely comments! Good to know you and shall look forward to more winning entries from you! Best wishes Krish
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April 16, 2021 at 2:16 PM
- Love the end ... a creative poem:) - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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April 16, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! We are all like children again enjoying nursery rhymes! thanks to Eve!!
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April 16, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish, this is so cute and true! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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April 16, 2021 at 12:57 PM
Thank you Eve! This is turning out to be a fountainhead of great nursery rhymes by all soupers!! we welcome your efforts in bringing a book out!
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April 16, 2021 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your top win! What a lovely nursery rhyme! The birds are so wise! BW ~ Mala
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Mala. See this show in my garden! Meant it as a lesson for children to watch out for predators!!
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April 16, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations on your win Krish, a delightful “Kitty and Bird” nursery rhyme ~ Belle
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April 16, 2021 at 4:53 AM
Thanks Belle! Thanks for your words of support! God bless!:)
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April 12, 2021 at 8:56 PM
I love the lesson in your wonderful rhyme Krish. I hope this does real well in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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April 12, 2021 at 10:15 PM
Thanks Connie! Yes indeed, we have to safeguard little ones against exploitation!
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April 10, 2021 at 12:20 PM
cats and birds are not a good mix at all , great rhyme Krish:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 10, 2021 at 2:43 PM
Thanks Jan! The Nursery rhyme is to teach children to watch out for predators who come as friends!
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