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little kitty watched the birds, from the rose bush to the fence, from the fence to the rose bush, from the rose bush to the fence, to and fro the three birds flew, in little kitty’s full view! said the kitty to the birds, why can’t we all be ‘play friends’! robin, blue chest and sparrow, I will catch if you fly low, so If I miss you, you win but If I catch you, I win! little birds laughed at kitty, Kitty, Kitty, how witty! if we play that game with you, we know well what you will do! cats and birds cannot be friends, out you go! find your own friends!
1St Placement Written 10/April/2021 Nursery Rhyme 4 competition Eve Roper sponsored 7 syllables with 6 lines in each stanza x3

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Date: 4/22/2021 7:09:00 PM
This is so adorable, Krish. How it did not finish at the top of the #1 pile I have no idea. Oh, well. You'll have to settle for a trophy and all my gushing admiration. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 4/22/2021 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! I enjoy writing and happy with whatever comes! Pleased it was liked by many and when children like it, that is the real reward!! Good to hear from you and hope you are back after your holiday!
Date: 4/17/2021 1:22:00 PM
Kitty trying to be sneaky but birds are too smart. Cute, story, Krish! Congrats on your 1st place win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/17/2021 1:27:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Pleased to have your kind comments! Have a great weekend!
Date: 4/16/2021 11:18:00 PM
Nice one Krish...Congrats on your win...do take care :)
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Date: 4/17/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thanks Carol! Nice to hear from you! Good wishes to you!
Date: 4/16/2021 3:55:00 PM
Krish! What a wonderful tale you tell!! Well done you!! Your imagery makes it easy to visualise the pacing feline! Lol! I’m with the birds—I don’t trust that kitty either! But poor kitty can not help it, its just what a kitty does. Lol. Congratulations on your win!! And thank you for your most encouraging visit! Deb
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Date: 4/16/2021 10:55:00 PM
Deb, Thanks for your visit and lovely comments! Good to know you and shall look forward to more winning entries from you! Best wishes Krish
Date: 4/16/2021 2:16:00 PM
- Love the end ... a creative poem:) - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/16/2021 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! We are all like children again enjoying nursery rhymes! thanks to Eve!!
Date: 4/16/2021 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish, this is so cute and true! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/16/2021 12:57:00 PM
Thank you Eve! This is turning out to be a fountainhead of great nursery rhymes by all soupers!! we welcome your efforts in bringing a book out!
Date: 4/16/2021 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win! What a lovely nursery rhyme! The birds are so wise! BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/16/2021 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Mala. See this show in my garden! Meant it as a lesson for children to watch out for predators!!
Date: 4/16/2021 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Krish, a delightful “Kitty and Bird” nursery rhyme ~ Belle
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Date: 4/16/2021 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Belle! Thanks for your words of support! God bless!:)
Date: 4/12/2021 8:56:00 PM
I love the lesson in your wonderful rhyme Krish. I hope this does real well in the contest. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/12/2021 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Connie! Yes indeed, we have to safeguard little ones against exploitation!
Date: 4/10/2021 12:20:00 PM
cats and birds are not a good mix at all , great rhyme Krish:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/10/2021 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Jan! The Nursery rhyme is to teach children to watch out for predators who come as friends!

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