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Kites

Summer time is here sky is blue sun is shining kites dance in the wind

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Bl Devnath

Date: 10/9/2014 8:13:00 AM

Nice picture of the dancing kite in the summer sky. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jake Ponce

Date: 10/20/2013 2:51:00 AM

What bright and sunny imagery! I can feel the warm summer breeze. It's like you captured summer in writing instead of a photograph. :)

Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 10/23/2013 9:38:00 AM

Thanks for the nice comment on my haiku Jake. :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/19/2013 1:28:00 AM

Lovely haiku with apt images,

Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 10/19/2013 2:44:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Mehta:)

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 10/18/2013 3:04:00 PM

Nice vivid haiku, puts scene in front of the reader. I love haikus!

Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 10/19/2013 2:49:00 AM

Many thanks Vassilis for the nice comments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/18/2013 2:59:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative work today..I could just see the scene..Sara

Nudershada Cabanes
Date: 10/19/2013 2:51:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed reading my work Sara. Thanks.