Kites

Summer time is here
sky is blue sun is shining
kites dance in the wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 8:13 AM
Nice picture of the dancing kite in the summer sky. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Ponce Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:51 AM
What bright and sunny imagery! I can feel the warm summer breeze. It's like you captured summer in writing instead of a photograph. :)
Cabanes Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Thanks for the nice comment on my haiku Jake. :)
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 1:28 AM
Lovely haiku with apt images,
Cabanes Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 2:44 AM
Thanks Dr. Mehta:)
Comporozos Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 3:04 PM
Nice vivid haiku, puts scene in front of the reader. I love haikus!
Cabanes Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 2:49 AM
Many thanks Vassilis for the nice comments.
Kendrick Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work today..I could just see the scene..Sara
Cabanes Avatar
October 19, 2013 at 2:51 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed reading my work Sara. Thanks.
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