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Kite Soars Away N-A

Tailed kite
Drifting higher
Grand sight

Thrill crowd
Gather around
Peals loud

Wind blew
Tug, pull, line breaks 
Shed tear


4/15/2020

cryflyingrhyme

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Caren Krutsinger

April 21, 2020 at 1:48 AM

This is fragile, delicate like a kite. Nice.

Richard Lamoureux

April 16, 2020 at 2:38 PM

Poor little kite. At least it had a chance to fly. ;0)

Sam Kauffman

April 15, 2020 at 11:46 PM

Always a risk when flying a kite - like the risks we face every day but we keep trying. So thought provoking Eve. Be well.

Quoth Theraven

April 15, 2020 at 10:22 PM

Eve, Flying a kite is not for the feint of heart. Just ask Charlie Brown. Lovely write in a Spring Rhyme, especially for the changing weather and times. -Richard

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 15, 2020 at 4:48 PM

Impressive dearest, Eve! Good luck. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas

April 15, 2020 at 1:17 AM

Sometimes nature is like a strict principal keeping everything under her control..She will not allow ambitious kites souring far far above..Good entry.. Good luck int he contest Eve..

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