Kite Over Grasmere

Today I understood Wordsworth, I walked where he had been The lake, such beauty all around, I saw what he had seen Upon the glassy water A mirror image of the hill So intensely breathtaking The lake was utterly still Each single blade of grass reflected Each daffodil seen twice Azure sky dashed with cirrus clouds Like frozen into ice The slightest breeze I could not feel The sun looked painted there I took the deepest breath I could Lungs filled with Grasmere air The perfectness of all I see An intoxicating sight To improve on such beatitude Is to soar just like a kite
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November 11, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Carolyne. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 23, 2010 at 10:30 PM
Carolyne, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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September 23, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Carolyne, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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September 22, 2010 at 10:59 AM
Like this one mucho. There are moments. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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September 21, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Nice poem, congratz on being featured
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September 21, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Carolyne. Love, Carol
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