Kite of a Forever Day

This is an exquisite and poem with it's perfect form (shape and concrete) my dear friend, Joe. It also reminds me about my dad (now in heaven) who loved to fly kite with my younger brother. I love it so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and thank you so much as well for your precious time to read my latest poem & your very inspiring comments. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora

Hello Joe, one of my all time favorite poet.., Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

I like this "Shape" poem a lot. I haven't flown a kite in a long time but enjoy watching peoplefly them. This poem reminds me of line of a Moddy Blues song: "This day will last a thousand years - if you want it to" Peace &blessings Matthew Anish

Joe, I was the one who sponsored this kite flyin contest..This really was a great entry and the only entry in this Idyl form...This could also be a concrete poem, right?...I read all the comments beneath it and it seems to be fav'd one that I should have placed...Thanks for your uplifting tho't on my teenie tiny lil poetry pages...maybe someday I will become as great a writer as u! You got some vernacular, KID!

classic form, departure is... am inhaling deep . Beauty write, thanks Joe, glad I got to ride on the tailwinds of this one, namaste :) ~N

and waiting. ......

liked the format here Joe, been in the un-healthy realm lately so I haven't been able to do work, but the health is getting better and maybe with God's help I'll return stronger than ever we'll see. Your good my English freind how are things across the pond, As they say cheerio for now Robert God bless

This is such an enjoyable poem, Joe. I am having trouble figuring out what you want in your contest. I didn't see the haiku. Oh well, I guess others do since you already have entries. Best wishes to all the contestants. Love, Crolyn

The form you chose for this write of yours dear poet, brings this poem to life ! A write which made my mind and heart this morning swell with joy and eager to share with my lil' Noah ! TY sir, and have a wonderful rest of the weekend my friend ! Much love, james

I'm still waiting, joe, I KNOW you can come up with some poems!!!

Well constructed, Joe! Ahhh... the possibilities as the kite swoops and dives!Nice imagery. Best wishes, Keith

That "feeling through a line," the possibilities. I like this one mucho the second time around. It grabs at consciousness one is not even aware of. Love, daver

keep coming back to this one. It is one of my favorites of yours.

Thanks Joe for my placement keep up all this fine writing! Light & Love

deeper still the authors quill, builds to the flying part, range of sky from red to blue, emotion merged with art.... great poetry Joe.... did look at the lady ....

Joe, did you see the movie on Wilbur wilberforce? It was named after that Amazing Grace song. Very nice! Maybe I can't be online much this weekend. But I hope to get back here full scale after that!

Thanks for stopping by..Sara

This is amazing Joe, I love the layout and the presentation is fab, thanks for my placement in your Contemporary Contest, that was a great contest.

Thanks for your comment, Joe. At age three I was standing on my head and spinning around. Pedaling to Telegraph Hill was a snap for me, but my sister didn't enjoy the ride. LOL I hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn

Like this Joe, love the form too, harry

Hey, Thanks for the comment on my poem...My garden has lovely weeds growing....though the plants are just existing....the story of my garden dreams. ;]

beautiful write, jjoe

This one is such a refreshing read, Joe :) I really enjoyed this, and I also see it (I mean the way you formatted it) as part of a kite-- very cool :D Thank you for passing by my poem :D

joe, back to this one again, wishing I saw it in the winners' circle. Thanks for your comments always, my friend!

Hi again, Joe! As I reread this I'm thinking that could be the topic and title of a beautiful song. It feels so tender and musical.:) Wishing you and yours the best! Love Mikki