Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Kite Fying

with rhythmic balance
                                      perfect kite flies up in sky
                                        thread reeling controls

                                          even in air's speed
                                   imbalanced plays no no dance
                                        back with nose diving

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Skat A May 10, 2015 at 11:24 AM BL, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT* Bl Devnath May 11, 2015 at 2:12 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. loved always,bl

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2015 at 6:12 AM Ah! I love the humor here as I lost many kites to those "nose dives" when I was younger. The "no no dance" made me laugh out loud! You have quite a talent for saying a lot in just a few lines, BL. Love and blessings to you, Carolyn Bl Devnath May 5, 2015 at 10:26 AM Many thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful praising comment and credit. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2015 at 9:23 AM - Bl, love this :) - Well done! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 11:45 AM Thanks for loving my poem and for 7 my lovely lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Robert Heemstra April 29, 2015 at 9:01 PM The fun of kite flying are memories to cherish. Bl Devnath April 30, 2015 at 11:43 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your visit and comment. Yes, i have recollected my childhood memory and cherishing the same. Loved always,bl