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Kit Kat For a Tootsie Pop

Next to me sits my little sister
    Trading our candy before diner
  She in Kitty purr curly hair do
    And orange tutu and me makes two

11/1/2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:35 AM
I did not even notice the orange tutu until I read this. Well done!
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November 2, 2019 at 6:44 PM
This was really cool. Ann
Adams Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:30 PM
such a great story for this image...it made me smile.... hugs :)
Theraven Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Eve, Very nice poem. Sweet sister treats.,two in tutu. -Richard
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November 2, 2019 at 6:19 AM
this is very sweet..
Allison Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 3:59 AM
what a sweet example, I've seen some lovely contest entries Eve, thanks for inspiring us to write:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Gorgeous write. Blessings to you, Gina
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