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Kissing In the Rain

two loving souls kissing in the rain
                                                  sharing happiness forever
                                                   one heartbeat, one body

                                        Each sweet caress like bolts of lightning
                                                    Passion ignites together 
                                      Kissing in the rain will bind them eternally



                                                           May 27, 2013
                                     For PD's "Kissing in the Rain" Contest
                                                        6th Place Winner

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Pandita Sietesantos Date: 10/30/2014 2:45:00 PM Lovely, romantic piece! Excelent write! Pandita Login to Reply

Roberthenry Poulin Date: 8/19/2013 10:32:00 PM This senryu becomes a senryu soul-mate poem where with the kiss hearts go in sync together as one soul. Ah! love lives eternal in your poem. Robert Henry Poulin. these are the poems that make people go Ah! this is what love is all about. It's wonderful. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 6/5/2013 10:09:00 AM Hi missed, this one so a very belated congratulations on this Maria love xx Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 6/3/2013 9:46:00 AM Good work Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/3/2013 1:19:00 AM Beautiful. All the best for contest. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/1/2013 2:46:00 PM Unique and passionate winning work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 5/30/2013 9:11:00 AM Wow! I'm also impressed with this piece of yours my dear friend Maria! A very beautiful and a very special haiku. My belated hearty congratulations as well for your awesome win! Cheers! love and big big sweet hugs to you, Leonora Login to Reply

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/29/2013 2:56:00 PM Congrats on your win. AO Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2013 1:09:00 AM congrats for your win, sweetie. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/28/2013 2:03:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Nato Calubiran Date: 5/28/2013 12:58:00 AM Congrats on the win! BTW are u a Pinay? Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2013 7:14:00 PM Maria. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/27/2013 10:15:00 AM - Sweet kiss in the rain, Maria. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 5/27/2013 9:43:00 AM Lips in unison, a Yin/Yang for the soul. Very nice work! Login to Reply