Bukang Liwayway Poet Haiku

Kissing In the Rain

two loving souls kissing in the rain
                                                  sharing happiness forever
                                                   one heartbeat, one body

                                        Each sweet caress like bolts of lightning
                                                    Passion ignites together 
                                      Kissing in the rain will bind them eternally



                                                           May 27, 2013
                                     For PD's "Kissing in the Rain" Contest
                                                        6th Place Winner

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Pandita Sietesantos October 30, 2014 at 2:45 PM Lovely, romantic piece! Excelent write! Pandita

Roberthenry Poulin August 19, 2013 at 10:32 PM This senryu becomes a senryu soul-mate poem where with the kiss hearts go in sync together as one soul. Ah! love lives eternal in your poem. Robert Henry Poulin. these are the poems that make people go Ah! this is what love is all about. It's wonderful.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 5, 2013 at 10:09 AM Hi missed, this one so a very belated congratulations on this Maria love xx

John Loving Iii June 3, 2013 at 9:46 AM Good work

Ravi Sathasivam June 3, 2013 at 1:19 AM Beautiful. All the best for contest.

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:46 PM Unique and passionate winning work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara

Len Gasun May 30, 2013 at 9:11 AM Wow! I'm also impressed with this piece of yours my dear friend Maria! A very beautiful and a very special haiku. My belated hearty congratulations as well for your awesome win! Cheers! love and big big sweet hugs to you, Leonora

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 2:56 PM Congrats on your win. AO

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:09 AM congrats for your win, sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:03 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nato Calubiran May 28, 2013 at 12:58 AM Congrats on the win! BTW are u a Pinay?

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:14 PM Maria. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2013 at 10:15 AM - Sweet kiss in the rain, Maria. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito May 27, 2013 at 9:43 AM Lips in unison, a Yin/Yang for the soul. Very nice work!