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Kissing In the Rain

two loving souls kissing in the rain sharing happiness forever one heartbeat, one body Each sweet caress like bolts of lightning Passion ignites together Kissing in the rain will bind them eternally May 27, 2013 For PD's "Kissing in the Rain" Contest 6th Place Winner

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/30/2014 2:45:00 PM

Lovely, romantic piece! Excelent write! Pandita

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/19/2013 10:32:00 PM

This senryu becomes a senryu soul-mate poem where with the kiss hearts go in sync together as one soul. Ah! love lives eternal in your poem. Robert Henry Poulin. these are the poems that make people go Ah! this is what love is all about. It's wonderful.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/5/2013 10:09:00 AM

Hi missed, this one so a very belated congratulations on this Maria love xx

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/3/2013 9:46:00 AM

Good work

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/3/2013 1:19:00 AM

Beautiful. All the best for contest.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2013 2:46:00 PM

Unique and passionate winning work..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 5/30/2013 9:11:00 AM

Wow! I'm also impressed with this piece of yours my dear friend Maria! A very beautiful and a very special haiku. My belated hearty congratulations as well for your awesome win! Cheers! love and big big sweet hugs to you, Leonora