Kissing In the Rain

Cloudy cold wet night
Our souls twist in pure passions
The rain melting us.

Losing to the surge
As cold warmth rubs our skin bare
Kissing in the rain.

Picture #5 and #6
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Very nicely done.Congrats on your win GL.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:19 AM
very nice. Congrats to you.
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Jones Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 1:40 PM
Love this...congratulations
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:27 PM
Thanks Jonnes.
Konos Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations, I love it...
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Judy,you are an inspiration. Lots of love.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 2:10 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Anne,my poet friend, thanks for stopping by.
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Goodness. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:32 PM
PD. I am short of words thanks so much.
Konos Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 6:35 AM
Lovely...sounds like a winner to me
Lanre Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Judy.
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