Elai Cee Poet Haiku

Kissing In the Rain

Under the rain’s song
                                               Witnessing the gay moonlight
                                                     Our kiss called blue sky

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                                                     "Tik, tik" naughty rain
                                                Giving romance for lovers
                                                    Sticky kiss is reigned
                                            
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                                              Breeze's dancing around them
                                                By the crystal drops of rain
                                                 Hide eye longed warm lips 



Kissing in the Rain Haiku's contest entry
Used picture # 5 for the first haiku
Used picture # 1 and 2 for the second haiku
Used picture # 3 for the third haiku

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Paul Callus April 6, 2014 at 7:24 AM 3 very good haiku; I notice that you have a soft spot for this form :) cu // paul

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper November 1, 2013 at 1:00 PM I can see by past comments this poem did you well in the contest, but its success is also quite evident by the beautiful words here. Very Good! MC Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 10:49 AM i got place here thanks

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2013 at 7:31 AM Belated congratulations on this win. Elai Cee July 24, 2013 at 6:02 PM thanks Richard happy to see you here

Shiraz Iqbal June 23, 2013 at 10:26 AM And this one is a gem :) You have a fan here Regards -Shiraz Elai Cee July 24, 2013 at 6:02 PM ur gem too

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:34 PM Much effort went into this winning work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Congrats..Sara Elai Cee June 1, 2013 at 7:16 PM thanks Sara

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 3:33 PM Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO Elai Cee May 30, 2013 at 9:57 AM hi thank you really appreciate it!

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:16 AM Congrats for your win, Elai. Elai Cee May 30, 2013 at 9:57 AM thank you Andrea...

Elai Cee May 29, 2013 at 12:55 AM Hi...wew! Thank you all... I don't expect it... well, thank you again especially to the beautiful and awesome LINDA! God bless us all!---from having a sweet smile---ELAI

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:07 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nato Calubiran May 27, 2013 at 9:36 PM Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 5:48 PM Elai, I love the pouring sound of your poem, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Bl Devnath May 27, 2013 at 11:56 AM Wonderful haiku on kissing in the rain. If for contest, good luck my friend. Thanks.....,loved always,bl Elai Cee May 29, 2013 at 12:56 AM thanks BL

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2013 at 5:06 PM this is more than woderful....great poetic appeal..:) huggs Elai Cee May 25, 2013 at 7:14 PM thank you net...miss ur comment! aprreciate it so much!

Nato Calubiran May 25, 2013 at 5:32 AM Dont u find it weird we're not speaking in Tagalog? Sana manalo ka sa contest. ;3 Elai Cee May 25, 2013 at 7:12 PM salamat

Judy Konos May 24, 2013 at 7:14 PM delightful You are indeed talented... Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 7:24 PM thanks Judy... i'm kinda not satisfied bout my works...hmmm

Poet Tacito May 24, 2013 at 2:18 PM Heart-warming with a side of delicious! :) Fantastic! Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 7:02 PM thanks Drake.. I pleased you lol..

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 12:17 PM - All three are just nice, Elai! - Good luck in the contest, I hope you will win !!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 7:03 PM u too... u have great haiku! u'r truly awesome!