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Kissing In the Rain

Under the rain’s song
                                               Witnessing the gay moonlight
                                                     Our kiss called blue sky

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                                                     "Tik, tik" naughty rain
                                                Giving romance for lovers
                                                    Sticky kiss is reigned
                                            
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                                              Breeze's dancing around them
                                                By the crystal drops of rain
                                                 Hide eye longed warm lips 



Kissing in the Rain Haiku's contest entry
Used picture # 5 for the first haiku
Used picture # 1 and 2 for the second haiku
Used picture # 3 for the third haiku

Copyright © Elai Cee | Year Posted 2013

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Paul Callus Date: 4/6/2014 7:24:00 AM 3 very good haiku; I notice that you have a soft spot for this form :) cu // paul Login to Reply

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 11/1/2013 1:00:00 PM I can see by past comments this poem did you well in the contest, but its success is also quite evident by the beautiful words here. Very Good! MC Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 4/13/2015 10:49:00 AM i got place here thanks

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/28/2013 7:31:00 AM Belated congratulations on this win. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM thanks Richard happy to see you here

Shiraz Iqbal Date: 6/23/2013 10:26:00 AM And this one is a gem :) You have a fan here Regards -Shiraz Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM ur gem too

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/1/2013 2:34:00 PM Much effort went into this winning work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 6/1/2013 7:16:00 PM thanks Sara

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 5/29/2013 3:33:00 PM Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM hi thank you really appreciate it!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/29/2013 1:16:00 AM Congrats for your win, Elai. Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM thank you Andrea...

Elai Cee Date: 5/29/2013 12:55:00 AM Hi...wew! Thank you all... I don't expect it... well, thank you again especially to the beautiful and awesome LINDA! God bless us all!---from having a sweet smile---ELAI Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/28/2013 2:07:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Nato Calubiran Date: 5/27/2013 9:36:00 PM Congrats. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/27/2013 5:48:00 PM Elai, I love the pouring sound of your poem, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 5/27/2013 11:56:00 AM Wonderful haiku on kissing in the rain. If for contest, good luck my friend. Thanks.....,loved always,bl Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/29/2013 12:56:00 AM thanks BL

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/25/2013 5:06:00 PM this is more than woderful....great poetic appeal..:) huggs Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/25/2013 7:14:00 PM thank you net...miss ur comment! aprreciate it so much!

Nato Calubiran Date: 5/25/2013 5:32:00 AM Dont u find it weird we're not speaking in Tagalog? Sana manalo ka sa contest. ;3 Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/25/2013 7:12:00 PM salamat

Judy Konos Date: 5/24/2013 7:14:00 PM delightful You are indeed talented... Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/24/2013 7:24:00 PM thanks Judy... i'm kinda not satisfied bout my works...hmmm

Poet Tacito Date: 5/24/2013 2:18:00 PM Heart-warming with a side of delicious! :) Fantastic! Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/24/2013 7:02:00 PM thanks Drake.. I pleased you lol..

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/24/2013 12:17:00 PM - All three are just nice, Elai! - Good luck in the contest, I hope you will win !!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Elai Cee Date: 5/24/2013 7:03:00 PM u too... u have great haiku! u'r truly awesome!