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Kissing In the Rain

Under the rain’s song Witnessing the gay moonlight Our kiss called blue sky -------------------------------------- "Tik, tik" naughty rain Giving romance for lovers Sticky kiss is reigned ----------------------------------- Breeze's dancing around them By the crystal drops of rain Hide eye longed warm lips Kissing in the Rain Haiku's contest entry Used picture # 5 for the first haiku Used picture # 1 and 2 for the second haiku Used picture # 3 for the third haiku

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2014 7:24:00 AM

3 very good haiku; I notice that you have a soft spot for this form :) cu // paul

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 11/1/2013 1:00:00 PM

I can see by past comments this poem did you well in the contest, but its success is also quite evident by the beautiful words here. Very Good! MC

Elai Cee
Date: 4/13/2015 10:49:00 AM

i got place here thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2013 7:31:00 AM

Belated congratulations on this win.

Elai Cee
Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM

thanks Richard happy to see you here

Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/23/2013 10:26:00 AM

And this one is a gem :) You have a fan here Regards -Shiraz

Elai Cee
Date: 7/24/2013 6:02:00 PM

ur gem too

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2013 2:34:00 PM

Much effort went into this winning work..Enjoyed reading your creative lines..Congrats..Sara

Elai Cee
Date: 6/1/2013 7:16:00 PM

thanks Sara

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 3:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Very nicely done. AO

Elai Cee
Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM

hi thank you really appreciate it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 1:16:00 AM

Congrats for your win, Elai.

Elai Cee
Date: 5/30/2013 9:57:00 AM

thank you Andrea...

Elai Cee

Date: 5/29/2013 12:55:00 AM

Hi...wew! Thank you all... I don't expect it... well, thank you again especially to the beautiful and awesome LINDA! God bless us all!---from having a sweet smile---ELAI