Kissing In the Rain

A secluded room 
Symphony flower fragrance 
Covers the lonely 

The Kiss in the rain 
Finds only two wet bodies
Clinging in hunger

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Kissing in the Rain-Contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Ahhh!!Congrats on your great win...Sara
Gasun Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 8:51 AM
This is also awesome! You did it very well too my dear friend Judy! I love it so much and so enjoyed! My belated hearty congratulations on your great win as well! Cheers! Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments and visit on my work. It's a great pleasure and honor from one of the great poets like you. More blessings! love and big hugs, Leonora
Nair Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Congrats on the win , friend!
Oyewole Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 2:53 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 1:06 AM
very nice. The last one especially I like! Congrats for your win.
Devnath  Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 10:32 AM
Coooooool my friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
Richards Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:47 AM
OOOla la !! So Romantic!! Nicely done! Congratulations, Judy!
May Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 7:38 AM
congrats on a fine win Judy
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 2:01 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:12 PM
Judy. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA
Devnath  Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 12:22 PM
Excellent beauty of rain. Good luck in PD's contest. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:13 PM
very nice haiku ...best wishes
Cee Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 7:06 PM
hi Judy.. check out my haiku, i made it for the kissing in the rain as you recommended... thanks for visiting my page. it's a big pleasure for me...keep smiling...ELAI. u have indeed, wonderful haiku here
Horsman Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 10:23 AM
just like one hungers for you poetry.. really lovely are these..
Cee Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 7:01 AM
yeah--- sweet haiku--Elai
Nair Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 11:20 PM
That's welcome hunger like when a feast is at hand. good one, Judy, thnx for stopping by!! Jag
Ainsley Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 7:05 PM
passion is always waiting in the rain, Thank you Judy.
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