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Kissing Deeply Blind

And kissing deeply blind. I'll forever remember holding you Or perhaps a few more times We may never meet again Uncover what makes us whole. Perhaps we'll define purity My eyes burning through your soul If you close your eyes and feel But we've spent centuries on a cloud. We've never met before This bar is hot and loud Come closer I can't hear you. Yet it's you that makes me breathe. There's a million women here You are interesting to me Come back and sit and talk. Like why are you in such a rush? Across the room he stares When your blinded by a touch It's rare to find that moment. (by kristen bruni for Backwards Poem Contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/1/2011 11:05:00 AM
Kristen...I have never known this style of poetry...I am assuming it is a contest?..but very brilliantly put together I might add..as I read it forward, then backwards and it makes sense both ways...WOW!~....Bravo!.....SugarbearUSA.......:)
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Date: 4/30/2011 7:57:00 PM
nice..K.B... good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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