Kisses On a String

A kiss for each cheek, is what I'm sending to you. One will last for only a week, the other should last about two. I'm sending them both on a string, so when they land, give the line a tug. On my end it will cause a bell to ring, telling me my kisses have landed with love. Don't worry about the line getting tangled, because when I blow kisses they shoot like stars. They are guided with great love from the angles, on a string of love to be forever ours.
Danny Boy:7-21-13©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Eastman Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 8:33 AM
So origional and touching. WOW!
Macfarlane Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 6:31 PM
Oh Dannyboy ...I want to ring your bell....LOL...this is a sweet write! Hugs
Vresk Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 6:35 AM
wow,can I have one kiss,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I love it,Ivy
Mckenzie Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 6:57 AM
awe very sweet love your view on kisses! Laura :)
Cheesman Avatar
July 23, 2013 at 2:57 AM
aaaaaw this poem will pull many strings Dan man because its soooo cute. Really loved the whole story - its wonderful....Shaz
Duncan Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 5:05 PM
love it ;}
Lamoureux Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Oops that last one missed your target and struck me right on the forehead. This is a delightful write Dan, I enjoyed it. The poem not the kiss *lol*
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:11 PM
- Soooooooooo Sweeeeeeeeeeeet !!!!! - Loooooooooove it my friend Dan !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kearley Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:36 PM
:o) Thank you my sweet friend- oxox
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