Kisses of Light

With lips firmly pressed 
The sun gives the horizon, 
Warm kisses of light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:42 PM
Creative imagery.
Lopez Avatar
April 18, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Nice last line, I love the entire concept.
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:57 PM
Impressive! I like your style.
Shahwan Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 12:23 PM
INTOXICATING...All the best. Thx for your comment re. MonaLisa. All the best.
De La Keur Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 11:15 PM
Wonderful write, makes me feel like a flower, lol....Love Aleera
Haniff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:08 PM
itttt sry
Haniff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:08 PM
sry I meant ut explains..lol
Haniff Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:07 PM
wow! you really got it captured here...i explains the scene in a perfect poetic manner....Maryam~~
Strand Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 12:57 AM
You capture the image so well Raul.Rgds Brian
Edmonds Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 5:21 PM
Great work, nice warm imagery.
Chircop Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 2:03 PM
lovely imaginery,the sun,warm kisses of light sends me right to a very good mood-charma
Higgins Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 11:38 AM
Wonderfully done my friend..the images are beautiful.
Townsend Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 10:44 AM
This is beautiful... so peaceul. The image is burned into my mind and I can see the sun clearly rising as I read. It is so warming as we recieve rain mixed with snowhere today. Great write. Smiles from Lolita
Devonshire Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 10:23 AM
A beautiful and sensual haiku, Raul. I had never thought about daybreak as "warm kisses of light," but it is a brilliant comparison. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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