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Kissed By the Passing Breeze

Have you ever felt the heat,
                                               
from a hot July night.
                                                       
I lay in a pool of sweat,
                                                     
as the water drops ran off of me.
                                     
I heard the clock strike twelve,
                                           
it was now midnight.
                                                         
Awakening to the bright sun light,
                                     
I was kissed by a passing breeze.
                                     
The cool air covered me,
                                                 
as it filled the morning room.

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Date: 7/6/2023 11:11:00 AM
beautifully executed....and one of those aspects in life so many miss....the pleasure so many caught up in bitterness or resentment miss....it is why almost every morning I play Pollyanna's Glad game in some form...this poem touches me deeply where it counts...the gift of life deserves gratitude...blessings this day my colleague
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Timothy Ray
Date: 7/7/2023 3:30:00 PM
indeed thank you is important not only to acknowledge kindness but more so cultivate our hearts in living life with grateful manners...when we live life taking it for granted we soon learn life returns the same
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/7/2023 3:22:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you can feel my passing breeze write and that it touched you. I feel it is very important to be thankful and to say thank you. Have a fun/blessed day..................
Date: 7/5/2023 11:00:00 PM
Paula l just love and very much need that passing breeze “always” it gives such relief and comfort! Simple pleasures in life are the best! Relatable and beautifully stated! Debx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2023 9:01:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you can feel my passing breeze write. Yes, it can give relief/comfort on a hot July night. I love simple pleasures. Have a fun/blessed day..................
Date: 7/5/2023 12:46:00 PM
Kissed By The Passing Breeze~ Date Written: 7/5/2023
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