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Kiss Your Eyes

Whene'er I think of how time flies
  I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes ...

     Perhaps in lieu of all sad goodbyes
       (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

          A token for the brokenhearted lies
            (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

              The ration of poor-fashioned alibis
               (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                 Just that bitter bit of compromise
                  (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                   A provisional mission of butterflies
                   (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                    A fling that things can make arise
                    (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                   The sound of your seducing sighs
                   (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                  So much a touch can not disguise
                 (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

                Small ways you always improvise
              (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes)

            Those thousand things we realize
          When you've a mind to fantasize

       It's ALL that and the other "why's"
     Why I tend to tenderly kiss ...

Your eyes.
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Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 6:35 PM
i enjoy those times when we simply write nonchalantly, as if in a whim, then only to realize a piece is ' all good.' like a kiss. superb, greg.... huggs
Barden Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 2:00 AM
Well-said, Nette, and I agree ... those are the truly pleasurable ones. I'm very happy that you could tell that from this one, because it was almost an afterthought - I had no intention to write when I started it, then - boom! So much fun! Thank you so much, and blessings! :-) <3
Ravidas Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 10:42 AM
The stunning content in the stunning form. The stunning pleasure for the reader's eyes and heart.
Barden Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Thank you so very much, Kurt, that's such a nice comment ... I'm very pleased that you liked it! Blessings, my friend! :-)
Romios Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 8:26 AM
What a beautifully composed poem with Intense meaning, wow.On my follow list, This is a FAV. Panagiota))))
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April 30, 2019 at 1:58 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Panagiota, I greatly appreciate the wonderful comment! Blessings! :-) <3
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Very cool, love the flow, the lines and the shape. xomo
Barden Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 1:57 AM
Thank you very much, Maureen - blessings! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 7:08 AM
Cute pic with your mostly Monorhyme and singsongy poem. Love the waviness. Someone could melt into this poem! Have a Happy Day!
Barden Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Thank you very much, Kim, that's very sweet - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3
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