Kiss Your Eyes

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Whene'er I think of how time flies I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes ... Perhaps in lieu of all sad goodbyes (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) A token for the brokenhearted lies (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) The ration of poor-fashioned alibis (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) Just that bitter bit of compromise (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) A provisional mission of butterflies (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) A fling that things can make arise (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) The sound of your seducing sighs (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) So much a touch can not disguise (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) Small ways you always improvise (I tend to tenderly kiss your eyes) Those thousand things we realize When you've a mind to fantasize It's ALL that and the other "why's" Why I tend to tenderly kiss ... Your eyes.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2019 6:35:00 PM

i enjoy those times when we simply write nonchalantly, as if in a whim, then only to realize a piece is ' all good.' like a kiss. superb, greg.... huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2019 2:00:00 AM

Well-said, Nette, and I agree ... those are the truly pleasurable ones. I'm very happy that you could tell that from this one, because it was almost an afterthought - I had no intention to write when I started it, then - boom! So much fun! Thank you so much, and blessings! :-) <3

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 4/29/2019 10:42:00 AM

The stunning content in the stunning form. The stunning pleasure for the reader's eyes and heart.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2019 1:59:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Kurt, that's such a nice comment ... I'm very pleased that you liked it! Blessings, my friend! :-)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/29/2019 8:26:00 AM

What a beautifully composed poem with Intense meaning, wow.On my follow list, This is a FAV. Panagiota))))

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2019 1:58:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Panagiota, I greatly appreciate the wonderful comment! Blessings! :-) <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/29/2019 8:08:00 AM

Very cool, love the flow, the lines and the shape. xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2019 1:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Maureen - blessings! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2019 7:08:00 AM

Cute pic with your mostly Monorhyme and singsongy poem. Love the waviness. Someone could melt into this poem! Have a Happy Day!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2019 1:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim, that's very sweet - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :-) <3