Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Kiss of Past

kiss on faded face
revived recollection of
long lost wizened youth.


Third Place in Time Poetry Contest sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S SELECT 8,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 6:43 AM This is such a soothing write Jenish! A complete journey revisited in such few words. Only you can do that. Congratulations on your win :) Jenish Somadas June 14, 2020 at 12:33 AM You words are inspirations to write more.. Thank you Aditi..

Shirley Hawkins June 8, 2020 at 11:12 PM youth fades for us all. Looks fade with age too True Love doesn't. ( even if your love's face needs an iron!) Very true " poem" Good luck in the contest Jenish ... Jenish Somadas June 9, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Shirley for your kind support.. Takecare always..

Jeanne Mcgee June 8, 2020 at 9:10 PM a nice senryu...I was not very wizened in my youth lol congrats with your poem Jenish. Jenish Somadas June 9, 2020 at 12:21 AM Thank you Jeanne.. lol.. I'm still not wizened...

Gershon Wolf June 8, 2020 at 2:44 PM Ha, ha! 'Faded face.' You can be glad that the woman in your photo is not judging the contest!! lol. Cheers, Gershon Jenish Somadas June 9, 2020 at 12:20 AM Lol... Dear Gershon, don't send her the link if you know her..lol..

Demetrios Trifiatis June 8, 2020 at 3:58 AM Such an invigorating kiss...! Beautifully done dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Jenish Somadas June 8, 2020 at 4:03 AM Thank you Demetrios..

Mahtab Bangalee June 8, 2020 at 3:20 AM kiss on the warmth; bring back the sense of happiness souvenir ... Jenish Somadas June 8, 2020 at 3:57 AM Thank you Mahtab for that poetic comment..