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Kiss of Past

kiss on faded face
revived recollection of
long lost wizened youth.


Third Place in Time Poetry Contest sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

Honorable Mention in BRIAN'S SELECT 8,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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Aditi Mishra Date: 6/12/2020 6:43:00 AM This is such a soothing write Jenish! A complete journey revisited in such few words. Only you can do that. Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/14/2020 12:33:00 AM You words are inspirations to write more.. Thank you Aditi..

Shirley Hawkins Date: 6/8/2020 11:12:00 PM youth fades for us all. Looks fade with age too True Love doesn't. ( even if your love's face needs an iron!) Very true " poem" Good luck in the contest Jenish ... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/9/2020 12:22:00 AM Thank you Shirley for your kind support.. Takecare always..

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/8/2020 9:10:00 PM a nice senryu...I was not very wizened in my youth lol congrats with your poem Jenish. Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/9/2020 12:21:00 AM Thank you Jeanne.. lol.. I'm still not wizened...

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/8/2020 2:44:00 PM Ha, ha! 'Faded face.' You can be glad that the woman in your photo is not judging the contest!! lol. Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/9/2020 12:20:00 AM Lol... Dear Gershon, don't send her the link if you know her..lol..

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/8/2020 3:58:00 AM Such an invigorating kiss...! Beautifully done dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/8/2020 4:03:00 AM Thank you Demetrios..

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 6/8/2020 3:20:00 AM kiss on the warmth; bring back the sense of happiness souvenir ... Login to Reply Jenish Somadas Date: 6/8/2020 3:57:00 AM Thank you Mahtab for that poetic comment..