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Kiss of Death

KISS OF DEATH full-bodied wine felicitous lipstick smile glistens in goblet gregarious sips ~ rogue wave of purple grape plenipotentiary drink steals Juliet’s kiss 11/4/2017 Rick Parise’s 8 Line Poem Contest Theme: Death

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James Inman

Date: 11/21/2017 4:29:00 AM

Well thought out write, Carol, quite clever and I love the way you used the word plenipotentiary.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/21/2017 5:35:00 AM

Thank you, James! <3 Kim

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2017 10:24:00 PM

Very clever! Lovely poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 10:32:00 PM

Thank you Line!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/10/2017 7:07:00 PM

Oh, I love everything about this, Kim, and how can one go wrong with "Uncle Bill"?? Gorgeous write - congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/11/2017 9:08:00 PM

Oh, I'm sorry - we always called William Shakespeare "Uncle Bill" in college, as an endearment ... I apologize. It was meant as a sincere compliment for the mention. :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 10:31:00 PM

Thank you! Sorry...don’t understand your reference.

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/10/2017 5:52:00 PM

Congrats!!! Kim...beautiful deathly piece lol...god bless...^WW^

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/10/2017 5:53:00 PM

Thank you WW! <3 Kim

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/7/2017 8:53:00 AM

Cool poem, Kim. Plenipotentiary, eh. Just showing off your literary chops, but it's all good, even as this poem is. Mighty fine poetry. Love and joy always.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2017 9:22:00 AM

LOL! I find that when I have looked up and used a word in past poems, it will come to me again! Thanks so much! <3

Maria Williams

Date: 11/7/2017 5:18:00 AM

A great theme you have picked here Kim. Especially love the last two lines Good luck in the contest...Maria

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2017 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, Maria!