David Scott Poet Rhyme

KiSs aNd TeLlS

In the end we said our farwells
Felt like what we had just died
Though our own personal hells
And the fact that l always tried

It was like walking on egg shells
Always tip-toing around her pride
When l think of her kiss and tells
Her true feelings she would hide

Though unlike the marrage vouls
Were my feelings ever justified
I think loVe maddness it spells
An emotional roller coaster ride

 

Again an old wriite idea from 2014
Couple of lines taken from poem calked loVe 2014 and some words were used in poems slip and slide 2020 and hearts retreat again abab and again about oast relationship

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Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2026 at 12:49 AM Sounds like you had a real up and down marriage. I like how you related it. The way you wrote the last word of the title, it was pretty cool because it kind of looked like the word Lies. And she obviously lied as well! David Scott July 17, 2026 at 6:52 AM Was not married just makimg point even in relationship like vouls you know being their for one another felt like a door matt thankyou your kind words xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 15, 2026 at 9:17 PM A well crafted poem, and a pleasure to read, David. Thank you for sharing. :) David Scott July 17, 2026 at 6:52 AM Thankyou my friend for reading xx