Kiss

So loving sweet, kiss brings the heat, a closer link to passion, entitled here, your love sincere, entitles you, your ration, heartfelt, the mind retreats, consumes one in its fashion, till estacy deletes... re: A Kiss Debbie Duncan Don Johnson

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/25/2012 5:17:00 PM

Reads like a winner ...Enjoyed reading today..Merry Christmas or is it over in Australia?.....Sara

Good Night

Date: 12/20/2012 5:49:00 PM

good poem don i liked it

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/20/2012 12:11:00 PM

Bittersweet... but nice... Terry

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/20/2012 8:18:00 AM

This is a truly glorious write my friend! I don't know how many poems of your I've missed lately...you are no longer a Premium Member! Are you going to get it again? I hate it that I might have missed some of your works! I have noticed that I haven't seen you around lately(but this could just be that I never noticed you don't have a yellow star next to your name anymore)!I am sorry, I truly have missed your poems!And speaking of awesomeness, this poem you have written is surely that! Great Work!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2012 4:39:00 AM

I blow a kiss over to you, Don. - A beautiful poem. - Hope Christmas will be a nice and peaceful for you and your family. - oxox / / Anne Lise :)