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Kinship On Soup

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From diverse time zones, we gather
knitting words for all soupy friends 
united by warmth and laughter
from diverse time zones, we gather
Language of praises, we saunter
beyond hearts, kinship never ends
from diverse time zones, we gather
knitting words for all soupy friends 



 ©triolet/ 8 syl count

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Carol Brown’s What I Love Most About Poetry Soup
By nette onclaud
1/19/12

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Jake Ponce

Date: 10/30/2013 1:25:00 PM

It's interesting how I got to this page. I suddenly felt the need to click on page 7 and I immediately spotted its title. Well, these are some of my thoughts at night that I can't properly put into words. It's nearly two years old but its essence is timeless.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/26/2012 4:39:00 PM

Words so true, Nette! Always a pleasure to read your poems. Congratulations on your fine win! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2012 12:21:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on a super second place win to tribute PS with brilliant words of expression .. perfection as always..luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/26/2012 11:45:00 AM

And i see yours have decided to "join up" to the winning entry's Nette..)

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2012 11:05:00 AM

I love it that you write in so many various forms.....(should be placed higher for taking the extra effort....not to mention, all your poetry sings with exceptional music! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/26/2012 10:21:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..I hope that I can knit something today..Sara

David Williams

Date: 1/26/2012 9:12:00 AM

Nette congrats on your win, great ..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/26/2012 7:28:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my sweet friend. Loved and enjoyed, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/26/2012 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my "What I Love Most About PoetrySoup" contest Nette. Thank you for your support. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2012 10:07:00 PM

Hey nette, this is a real charmer. I see you have three different rhymes going on inside it instead of just two. I'm going to see if you are doing your other one this way too.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/21/2012 6:53:00 PM

a lovely sentiment, and so true :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2012 5:29:00 AM

Good luck in Carol's contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Soup is the place to be with our poetry family..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Russell gave me an idea to eat a Hersey's kiss so I did get a loaded kiss..It was loaded with sugar..Sara

M.I.A .

Date: 1/20/2012 12:42:00 AM

knitting words... love this expression nette. gentle and kind is how this poem sipped in my heart.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/19/2012 4:51:00 PM

You are amazing and this is so beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing. It's another masterpiece Nette!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/19/2012 2:59:00 PM

This one puts it all in a nutshell..all the best, jag

Kash Poet

Date: 1/19/2012 11:06:00 AM

I agree with harry's comment below.You are a wonderful ambassador for all of us.I am glad that you are again posting poems regularly.This is a little gem from you Nette.Best wishes.