Nette Onclaud Poet Triolet

Kinship On Soup

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From diverse time zones, we gather
knitting words for all soupy friends 
united by warmth and laughter
from diverse time zones, we gather
Language of praises, we saunter
beyond hearts, kinship never ends
from diverse time zones, we gather
knitting words for all soupy friends 



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Carol Brown’s What I Love Most About Poetry Soup
By nette onclaud
1/19/12

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Jake Ponce October 30, 2013 at 1:25 PM It's interesting how I got to this page. I suddenly felt the need to click on page 7 and I immediately spotted its title. Well, these are some of my thoughts at night that I can't properly put into words. It's nearly two years old but its essence is timeless.

Audrey Haick January 26, 2012 at 4:39 PM Words so true, Nette! Always a pleasure to read your poems. Congratulations on your fine win! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 26, 2012 at 12:21 PM congrats Nette luv on a super second place win to tribute PS with brilliant words of expression .. perfection as always..luv..

Joe Maverick January 26, 2012 at 11:45 AM And i see yours have decided to "join up" to the winning entry's Nette..)

Carrie Richards January 26, 2012 at 11:05 AM I love it that you write in so many various forms.....(should be placed higher for taking the extra effort....not to mention, all your poetry sings with exceptional music! :)

Sara Kendrick January 26, 2012 at 10:21 AM Congrats on your winning work..I hope that I can knit something today..Sara

David Williams January 26, 2012 at 9:12 AM Nette congrats on your win, great ..David

Bl Devnath January 26, 2012 at 7:28 AM Congrats on your win, my sweet friend. Loved and enjoyed, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown January 26, 2012 at 5:59 AM Congratulations on your placement in my "What I Love Most About PoetrySoup" contest Nette. Thank you for your support. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich January 22, 2012 at 10:07 PM Hey nette, this is a real charmer. I see you have three different rhymes going on inside it instead of just two. I'm going to see if you are doing your other one this way too.

Black Eyed Susan January 21, 2012 at 6:53 PM a lovely sentiment, and so true :)

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2012 at 5:29 AM Good luck in Carol's contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Soup is the place to be with our poetry family..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Russell gave me an idea to eat a Hersey's kiss so I did get a loaded kiss..It was loaded with sugar..Sara

M.I.A . January 20, 2012 at 12:42 AM knitting words... love this expression nette. gentle and kind is how this poem sipped in my heart.

Suzanne C. Goudreau January 19, 2012 at 4:51 PM You are amazing and this is so beautifully crafted. Thank you for sharing. It's another masterpiece Nette!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair January 19, 2012 at 2:59 PM This one puts it all in a nutshell..all the best, jag

Kash Poet January 19, 2012 at 11:06 AM I agree with harry's comment below.You are a wonderful ambassador for all of us.I am glad that you are again posting poems regularly.This is a little gem from you Nette.Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2012 at 11:04 AM Agree....glad you written it down...thank you Nette!!!!!oxox love Anne-Lise

Harry Horsman January 19, 2012 at 10:41 AM agree agree agree, what a wonderful ambassador you are for all of us, this could be soup's mission statement. it is so good. good luck in contest.