kingfisher


a flash of teal blue
iridescent plumage gleams
fresh fish for supper

birdhaiku

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Shadow Hamilton

March 13, 2025 at 8:23 AM

lovely Jan you captured the kingfisher magnificently kudos Hugs Shadow

Duke Beaufort

March 12, 2025 at 7:05 PM

Jan, your words really bring the action to life. Nice job really.

Hilda Greenhough

March 4, 2025 at 12:05 PM

The painting is breathtaking, and your poem has explicit energy that is so fitting for a bird. Very pleasant story.

Paula Goldsmith

March 4, 2025 at 9:36 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write with a great picture. Have a fun day writing away..............

Margaret Foster

March 3, 2025 at 6:32 PM

Nicely done, Jan. A pleasure to read.:)

Ink Empress

March 3, 2025 at 9:18 AM

Dear Jan, This is such a beautiful haiku, you are very good at these and i love the picture youv used too, so stunning! Iv not seen many kingfishers in the maldives. I really love especially the line "iridescent plumage gleams" so artistic! Pleasure reading this today. Sending you light always