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03/01/25

 

a flash of teal blue iridescent plumage gleams fresh fish for supper

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Date: 3/13/2025 8:23:00 AM
lovely Jan you captured the kingfisher magnificently kudos Hugs Shadow
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Date: 3/12/2025 7:05:00 PM
Jan, your words really bring the action to life. Nice job really.
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Date: 3/4/2025 12:05:00 PM
The painting is breathtaking, and your poem has explicit energy that is so fitting for a bird. Very pleasant story.
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Date: 3/4/2025 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write with a great picture. Have a fun day writing away..............
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Date: 3/3/2025 6:32:00 PM
Nicely done, Jan. A pleasure to read.:)
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Date: 3/3/2025 9:18:00 AM
Dear Jan, This is such a beautiful haiku, you are very good at these and i love the picture youv used too, so stunning! Iv not seen many kingfishers in the maldives. I really love especially the line "iridescent plumage gleams" so artistic! Pleasure reading this today. Sending you light always
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:01:00 PM
Smashing, Jan. Love kingfishers. Probably only ever seen half a dozen or so. But you you sure know one when you see one. Enjoyed. Terry
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:07:00 AM
a poetic flash captured by the magical, trained lenses of an efficient poet, salute, alkas
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2025 11:12:00 AM
That's a sweet comment Alkas, I much prefer humour but i do write the odd serious poem too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 3/2/2025 12:10:00 AM
I just love this Jan…..simplistic beauty! Debx
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Date: 3/2/2025 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Deb, makes a change from my usual style - there is more to me than just a poop poet lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/1/2025 4:30:00 PM
Picture perfect! Nice.
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Date: 3/1/2025 5:12:00 PM
Thanks Marinus:-) hugs Jan xx

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